I love Keen’s book. And I hate it.
Parts of it are brilliant. With editing, more of it could be. But I don’t know how the heck to fix the structure, and I don’ t know how to fix the POV problem.
And I don’t want to spend time fixing it because it makes me sad. 🙁
Argh.
Aw, sweetie. I wish I knew how to take the sad/argh part away, but they’re often so interwined with the GOOD stuff… Does it help that in the end, it’s GOOD and it’ll be worth it?
I hope so. I really do.