My progress today would be okay, if I were not on such a tight schedule. Every day I am farther behind!
But I have to do it right. No point in charging forward just for the sake of charging forward.
I wonder if the “reviewing every rewritten” scene thing could go, though. Since I’m quite aware this is not my final run-through.
Also, I am sad that much of Eve’s smart-mouth comments must be cut. Not because they are out of character (they very much are NOT) but because I must cut the scene.
Hello, 24yo brain? Exactly HOW did you think this plot made any sense at all?