Oh, sure, now I can see the problems, after reading 250+ hooks…
But darn it, I thought it was a pretty good hook!  It’s here , if you’d like to check it out. Click on “Show Original Post” to see my hook, and Miss Snark’s response. And leave a comment, please? I was hoping for more in the comment trail. The Snarklings are a wise and witty bunch, but I suppose they’re as deluged as I am. I can barely keep up reading the hooks, let alone commenting.
A review like this helps, though (garnered from the reposting of Shades and Hues, second Weiss fic) : “How can I review when I’m fucking speechless?”
Words to warm a writer’s heart, right there.