Well…I did edit. I’m on *blush* page four.
Hey, this is hard going! I’ve made a lot of changes I’m pretty happy with, and written a lot of “in the margins” stuff–the things I know happen, to explain what I choose to show the reader–and I think it’s going well.
Except it’s 1420 and I feel like I need to go to bed.
So I’m dropping it for a while. A couple loads of laundry, some detail cleaning including wiping down the garbage can…my muses will be ready to get to work after enough of that.  😛